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It was the night of Halloween,
A night loved by most,
A night to get candy, hang with friends,
And perhaps see a ghost.

The moon was out
And the wind sent out a chill.
Two girls were walking by,
One with a mind that could kill.

"Worst Halloween ever," Amanda said,
Holding her jester dressed fella doll.
"Why do you say that?" Jesse asked,
The weight of her candy ready to make her fall.

"It's cold, I'm tired, And this is boring.
No one is out and there's no one around.
The night is starting to creep me out-."
Amanda paused. "Hey, what's that sound?"

Jesse looked back and then grinned.
"Maybe it's the ghost of Anna Croat.
They say she comes out on Halloween,
And shoves scissors down your throat."

Amanda clutched her fella tighter.
"Stop trying to scare me,
You know I freak out easily."

The breeze only grew stronger,
The sharp wind ripped through their hair.
Amanda grabbed her arms as she shivered,
Whispers in the wind giving her a bit of a scare.

"Let's just go home," Jesse said at last,
"I think it's about to rain."
Amanda got up in agreement,
Then let out a loud scream of pain.

Jesse looked back at her friend,
And let out a shriek.
Scissors were down so far in her throat,
That she couldn't speak.

She looked at her hand
And found them on the blade.
She then knew that she was at fault
For the mess that she had made.

Why had she killed her friend?
Watching her scream, cry, and choke,
Jesse pulled the scissors out.
It was supposed to be a joke!

She slowly stepped away,
Dropping her bags on the ground.
She knew what she had to do.
Make sure her friend was never found.

People do the strangest things,
Even if they're not noticed or seen.
But they only grow more twisted
On nights like Halloween.
©2009 ~EbonyClokk
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Author's Comments

I've never entered a contest before, but my friend really wanted us to enter this one, so I did. lol I know the story is a bit gruesome and I probably would have made it more so, but limit was 250 words. oh well, tell me what you think

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:iconspoofdecator:
wow! naomi! very gruesome and sent chills!!
gave me ideas for pieces too! lol

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I support sunny days and bright futures!!
:iconzukros:
Very vivid and chilling, probablky the best entry I've seen so far :)

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"Give a man a fire and he's warm for a day, but set fire to him and he's warm for the rest of his life."
~Terry Pratchett
:iconimadoki45:
oooooooo O.O i think i'll stay away from scissors on halloween from now on..

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copy someones artwork and call it your own? don't worry, i'll only kill you once.

watch me and i'll watch you back ^ ^
:iconebonyclokk:
haha yes. It's something I made up though, so you should be good O.O

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If life is a labor, I'll slave till the end
:iconebonyclokk:
hehe thanks 8D glad you like. I hope it wins something at least

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If life is a labor, I'll slave till the end
:iconebonyclokk:
thanks 8D *inspiring*

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If life is a labor, I'll slave till the end
:iconimadoki45:
i hopes so :P lol

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copy someones artwork and call it your own? don't worry, i'll only kill you once.

watch me and i'll watch you back ^ ^
:iconzutararaven:
This is wonderful!
The three line stanza is a bit out of place though, perhaps you could fill in another line to make it match the other stanzas?
Otherwise this is wonderful work~ :)

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[link] DO NOT CLICK! D8 [link] OR THAT ONE... o.O
:iconebonyclokk:
hehe thanks so much. Yeah, I should work with that a bit more. Thanks again for the fav 8D glad you like it

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If life is a labor, I'll slave till the end

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